The Sneaker Princess - Ch 13

So much emotion in this chapter!

Stuff: (Why are there nearly always exactly 3 things? O_o LOL)

1. "I just know it'd make the Creator unhappy if I painted the walkway if ya." If ya??? This doesn't make sense to me. 

2. There are looots of semicolons in this chapter, but unfortunately most of them should be commas instead. (I know I mentioned this before, but just a reminder.) 

3. "Instead something warm filled her lower body; something burning even a form without flesh to sear." I really don't understand the 2nd part of this sentence. 

I can't believe the story is nearly over. I shall read the epilogue soon. I hope it has a happy ending. :3