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(I really need to learn how to do Icon linking.)
...still not honestly sold on the title. It's the best I could come up with for now. XP
Editing was done a bit hastily on this one so apologies if more text errors than usual crop up. Was a bit more concerned with the character presentation, character logic, and the sheer amount of exposition in this. Feels like all three are potential weak points but, as usual, I could be over criticizing myself. Not sure really.
Think the problem is I've never been too confident with my set ups and Kari makes for potentially a rough character to read; simply because I'm trying to utilize a logic-focused character who 'isn't' a brain box (since most stories usually default to having those go hand in hand).
Eh, enough rambling. Throwing this into the pool and seeing what all of you think.
Chapter Length: 6,017 Words