Yeah, I know. I took way too long for only 4.1K words. ~_~; I dunno. Feels like this might be kinda awkward in the flow. Not sure if having such minimalistic dialog works for or against it. Maybe it's just me. Thoughts?
The original version one was in chapters to begin with. But when I thought I had a publisher I took it down. X_x Then when that fell through I just tossed in the full version without bothering to do splits. Totally get what you mean though.
Thanks. @_@ Very much appreciated. Helps put my mind a bit at ease. Will be able to focus more on Ch 3 then fretting over this one.