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Sakuri 2.0 - Chapter 2 by Aio-chan Sakuri 2.0 - Chapter 2 by Aio-chan

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Yeah, I know. I took way too long for only 4.1K words. ~_~; I dunno. Feels like this might be kinda awkward in the flow. Not sure if having such minimalistic dialog works for or against it. Maybe it's just me. Thoughts?
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Gluepaw Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it feels much easier than version 1, even if its only because you're splitting the uploads into chapters so i dont feel like i have to marathon it

to me it reads just fine, i dont really feel like the chapter was incomplete or anything like that
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The original version one was in chapters to begin with. But when I thought I had a publisher I took it down. X_x Then when that fell through I just tossed in the full version without bothering to do splits. Totally get what you mean though.

Thanks. @_@ Very much appreciated. Helps put my mind a bit at ease. Will be able to focus more on Ch 3 then fretting over this one.
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