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Sakuri 2.0 - Chapter 1 by Aio-chan Sakuri 2.0 - Chapter 1 by Aio-chan

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Whelp, time to start the inevitable re-write. Going to be shorter chapters in order to try and manage scenes more properly. Thoughts on the intro?
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Gluepaw Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it, it flows well.

you have a very clean writing style and it is very smooth reading, cant wait for more :3
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